My New Article: Understanding a Patient with Crohn's

[Ataraxia]

I've recently written a thoughtful article regarding the lifestyle of a Crohn's sufferer, with knowledge and advice for the carers of patients:

http://crohns-disease.suite101.com/article.cfm/understanding_a_patient_of_crohns_disease

I'd appreciate feedback
Oh, and don't hesitate to click the google ads within the article to earn me a bit of revenue Only takes 2 seconds.

Cheers,
Andy.

 

[GoJohnnyGo]

Excellent article Andy.

This should be required reading.

 

[MINI Cooper]

My only request would be use 'he or she' or 's/he' rather than just 'he'
in your article, when referring to the Crohnie.

 

[teeny5]

I liked your article...I do agree with Mini though. Well written and some really good advice.

 

[jamie2462]

Agree with Mini as well...Lots of good info for the person on that road now.

 

[Ataraxia]

My only request would be use 'he or she' or 's/he' rather than just 'he'
in your article, when referring to the Crohnie.

I was also told this by the editor of the website. I have corrected it, but still don't quite understand. I am by no means "politically correct mad", but surely using "patient" as opposed to he or she would be a lot more user-friendly? I don't like writing as if I'm specifically talking about one gender.

 

[Ataraxia]

Article has been updated

 

[fenway1971]

great article!

you should mentioned this forum in it along with the others

 

[Ataraxia]

I've linked to the forum from my site anyways. Don't worry